Wednesday, 5 June 2013

Smoking Report



As part of our requirements in the course, we have to make a presentation for a subject related to business management. In this report I will write about the student Saleem Al Amri H00134725. His topic was about smoking. Smoking is not an interesting subject, because we know the harm caused by smoking, and had previously read about the subject; and also Saleem has not added any new information that maybe important to us; in this report I will be talking about the subject and style of presentation as well as its contents of the offer.

 

Smoking is boring  where we learn it on a daily basis; the student has not added any new information. And also he did not have confidence in himself, as well as his voice wasn’t clear and he had no eyes contact. And he has difficulty to deliver the information. Saleem didn’t prepare for the presentation so he was reading from the screen.

 

            Now I will write about the slides in terms of content and formatting. The slides were clear as well as the font; he used some pictures. Most of the text in the slides was poor English language; the translation was not good and he included incorrect meanings. He also included a video to show the harm of smoking.

 

            Overall the presentation was poor, Saleem should work more on his English language and also he has to work on his presentation skills. The subject is very important for the grade so he should choose a good subject.

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